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Original: 10/6/2006 6:45 PM
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Friday, October 06, 2006

want some sweet?

 
THAT dessert
 
THAT was good.
as the ice cream melts on our tongue
savoring the sweetness of uncovered gallon of desire.
 
stealing glances left and right
looking for someone who might join
wishing there was NONE.
 
for it is ours
and for OURS ONLY to share
the creamy goodness
of uncovered gallon of desire.
 
you got the spoon
then we opened the blue plastic container
digging in -- giggling
realizing what we're doing --
 
hiding in a closet of fabrics
few shining artificial stars
witnessing this rendezvous
of children hastily eating stolen ice cream
 
savoring the sweetness
of uncovered gallon of desire
praying Mommy won't catch us.
 
-hot and fresh from the oven in my skull,
rhanriey
(dalaw ng musa sa wakas)
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dalaw ng musa? baka naman dalaw ng MUSANG. lol

corny, I know. hehe. paki mo? hahaha!

MISS YOU SO MUCH!

Posted 11/7/2006 7:27 PM by fallencritic - reply


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